Will this be a happy circle?

In class today we did two editing "workshops" to help better our essays. I enjoyed them both. The first little group session really gave me ideas and useful feedback. Both Erika and Nicole sat attentively and gave me ideas in which to better my essay. I quite enjoyed this exercise. The second workshop wasn't as productive in my opinion. I did as the loose instructions asked.. but all that was apparent was what I was missing. I wasn's as sure of how to fix my issues.